Monday, March 15, 2010

A Walk With You Comments

Rating: 4.9

Leaves crackle and crunch beneath my feet
as l inhale the air that smells so sweet
my hair wind-blown across my face
around my fingers your hand will lace
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David Beckham 16 July 2010

Indisputable! ! Extraordinary! ! Talent! ! Intense description of a moment that would make Leonardo Dicaprio proud! !

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Awesome! This is breath taking. Beautiful poetry! Loved it.; D

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Stefani Dutey 02 June 2010

awh! i like this! it's really cute ^^)

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