A Walk With Maid Merriam.....Merry With The Merry Band Comments

A story of blissful oblivion while sauntering in a place resembling Eden is described in bright imagery. The verse ends in a mellow gloom and sighs and slow goodbyes, a lovely write.

a perfect 10.........amazing imagery........a musical lore of special moments.........liked it best......suddenly comming back to harsh realities is really touching and painful.....

be nice with your love. good luck

truly sweet, wonderful poem..loved it much...so beautiful rhymes painted a very vivid dreamy images..will put in my favorite She so fresh; dimpled an cute, full of life in her well worn suit. chitter and chatter we paced along Then she froze, we heard the gong A pause! …then a zip an thud. An arrow lands with a towed bud Inched we forward to the moat, hidden in the reeds, there a boat. With a beam she said I have to go As she slowly began to row Waved we sad an slow good byes Floated as she, away on my sighs Dark in the shadows a hooded form Click! I logged off, to stall the storm.

I like this one.. Thank you for sharing such good writings Alexia

Very beautiful poem. Added 10 to it.

I agree with Anastasia that it is a beautiful story. The rhyme and imagery is wonderful too! Very beautiful. 10 Karin Anderson

Such a beautiful story you have created. I love the rhyme and the journey you took us on.