A Walk To Remember! ! Comments

It wasn’t a fire, or a desire, but, one thing is certain, something burnt within me When I walked with you…- - -> ah the pangs and nerve-wracking uncertainties of attraction

Truly breathtaking in your skill at laying bare all your emotions with such beautiful imagery, you keep it simple and your words capture the readers imagination! You write so beautifully! !

Maybe, it was infatuation mistakenly thought of as love? All these things can happen when you are infatuated with someone also. You can be fooled into thinking you're in love, because you feel desire so intensely when you want to be with someone. This poem just brought up these thoughts while reading it. It sounds like your heart was truly touched and then left bereft, can feel the pain. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

very nice poem and truely heart touching. please come to my page and read my poems. i am very small in age and need your encouragement....please come

Your poem is nice and very touching. It make me to have rethink. It makes me wonder if i have had anybody so precious in my life befor, someone who could walk with me in times that and needed them. But at the end, it sound so sad, that the person whose companion u Cherished the most, left u stranded in thoughts. Nice one, and i imageries are perfect

wow this is wonderful.....what a masterpiece, you have the vibe man...love the way you expressed these thoughts about love....l cordially invite you to read my new poem ''heaven l need a hug'' and a poetry collaboration entittled '' the told legend''

It's a nice elaboration for liking or love or may be crush. All those tricks or many more come from that.... nice. You may read my Sonnet: Love to get an idea about love

When I was at school (many many years ago!) , I remember one of my teachers saying never to use the term 'all of a sudden' because when said quickly it sounds like the name 'Oliver Sudden' - I always remembered it and therefore never use this phrase. Replace it with 'suddenly', otherwise a great poem.

It was a wonderful poem. You don't need to improve anything.