Monday, October 1, 2007

A Walk Through Withrow Park, And On Comments

Rating: 5.0

And in the orchestra of Withrow Park,
I’ve searched for meaning in the violins.
Within the strings I’ve held my breath,
within the breeze that tosses scarves
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Ben Partenay
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Sandra Fowler 03 October 2007

What an excellent piece! Your mood is strong and true. It is a pleasure to read you, my poet friend. As always, Sandra

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Ernestine Northover 01 October 2007

What a delicious piece Ben, a lovely flowing and eloquent piece of writing. A delight to find. Just beautiful. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Goldy Locks 01 October 2007

strong questioning, Ben; you seem to always be growing. keep on, sjg

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