Wednesday, August 26, 2009

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Rating: 2.5

Walking through floating clouds in a vale;
Only sound of rushing water, as we exhale
Out the white smoke one day, early December.
With envy I watch hill folk walk at leisure.
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Mamta Agarwal
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Raj Nandy 02 September 2009

I ENJOYED READING THIS POEM AS MUCH AS YOU -TAKING BATH IN THE CHILLED WATER! AS A DOC, I RECOMMED SOME BRANDY AND HOT WATER TO BE SIPPED SOON AFTER, TO PREVENT A COLD! THANKS FOR SHARING MAMTA JI! - Raj

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 31 August 2009

Hi Mumtaji this is a fascinating journey, all the way.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 29 August 2009

I read this one in museindia. Actually to write a comment on this poem only I returned to PH. This is a great piece Mamtaji. Describing so vividly an event in life so beautifully, so vividly, with a dash of humour is not easy. This is a splendid exhibition of your poetic prowess. As Pujaji was observing, you take us, along with your world, into your beautiful world....Great piece indeed.

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Marieta Maglas 28 August 2009

nice lyric poem, well written........10

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Indira Babbellapati 28 August 2009

and finally i too washed my tired feet in the cool waters!

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premji premji 27 August 2009

mamtaji, true cross-section of love and life..........

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Ramesh T A 27 August 2009

Refreshing, hilarious and joyous expedition I have enjoyed vicariously along with you!

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Rakesh Bedi 27 August 2009

You succeed in carrying one on the clouds, mamta; simply Beautiful!

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 26 August 2009

This is absolutely gorgeous verse, Mamta. You've got me walkin' on air! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! FjR

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C. P. Sharma 26 August 2009

A poetess' eye roaming over the hills and dales Browsing Nature's beauteous bounty on the way, Springs and waterfalls and their refreshing music Take away the fainting fatigue of the weary day. CP

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