A Walk Through A Cemetry Comments

A lovely picture painted of your beautiful walk in a cemetery filled with nature and history.

At life, so alive, so alive, like you and me Just like a still-life, that sit on an easel A good poet can see the beautiful life in a cemetery as well and Allan James Saywell, said well about it. Congrats.

The path was narrow! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Did nobody notice the misspelled word in the title? Nor the grammar mistakes in the poem? You all say it's a great write. What hypocrites you all are!

The natural tranquility in a cemetery is well painted. Congrats for being the member's PoD.

There is a soothing stillness in the poem. Heartiest congratulations for the selection !

ii like this, allan. like the accessible and familiar picture you create, like the vibrant scene you create against the setting of the cemetery (you'll need to correct the spelling) , like how you let us infer meaning from the scene you create. i look forward to reading more poems by you. -glen kappy

a nicely descriptive poem that painted a picture fit for any easel? well written Allan

Allan James, such a poignant poem of the day.... congrats for being chosen... a big 10++++

The path was narrow and cobbled, ..... well penned, congrats. and thanks for sharing