Friday, May 4, 2012

A Walk On Malvern Hill Comments

Rating: 4.8

The Air is still on Malverns hill
I stand above the Cloud
Colwall and Welland hidden
By a whitened dampened cloud
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Malcolm Wakeman
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Robert Bartlett 29 June 2017

I couldn't find the path That led up to Malvern Hill; So I looked online instead For poets yet unread. Within my Member Area, On the left side of my screen I clicked the row below - And your name appeared from Worcester, The city where I grew. But, alas, we probably won't meet, As the pond that lies between us Harbors water, not so sweet! So please forgive this poor intrusion, As I wish for you the best; But do help us see the path, that leads to Malvern Hill, So we all can get some rest!

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Chinedu Dike 17 May 2015

Lovely narrative poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON

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Wonderful imagery in the poem and I was almost there reading your lines. Love will come, love will go But the hills will stay right on That future poets may over coffee mugs warm Look at the view and perhaps feel the ancient charm............. Sir, I welcome you to my page too.... and a very happy new year to you as well

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