Tuesday, September 22, 2009

A Walk On A December Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sky seems brittle,
an inky dome of stars.
Blued shadows stretching
to reach the fence post spars.
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B. V. Dahlen
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Jean Dament 22 September 2009

I loved your descriptions & imagery in this nature poem. Loved it. I have one similiar, but not as good as yours. Please read 'Snow Scene'. Thanks Ravensong

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