Monday, September 25, 2006

A Walk Of Trees Comments

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Come with me. along a path I know
That runs beside a deep narrow river
That in places is only a stream
Into which twiggy alders and willows
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Cyclopseven R 11 November 2007

Trail of trees? Fantastic write. I can see the fertile soil shadowed by the wondrous trees. In my mind, they speak with love, the trees that are rooted with layers of history.

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Raul Castelan 07 June 2007

This takes me back to Bocaccio's writing. He was but a good author to have read. You did a superb job in this one.

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Scarlett Treat 25 September 2006

Funny, but when I read your title, A Walk of Trees, I visualized trees walking, and possibly dancing, when I turned my back. But your journey through the woods was just lovely whether the trees are dancing or not. Maybe in a passing breeze? ?

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John Tiong Chunghoo 25 September 2006

this is a great poem. i love it. very observant.

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