Saturday, September 26, 2015

A Walk Into The Clouds Comments

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I went to place where the birds stay,
With a tiny flock of people one day.
I climb & I stand,
On the giant reservoir that the nature withstand.
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AKANSHA NAHAR
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Dr Antony Theodore 18 January 2016

Surrounded with the clouds here I stand now, On the top with a cry of Joy. The summit lies inside the blues. And I became a thousand feet tall, MMMMy God you are wonderful! ! what a great imagination. thousand feet tall i am now inside the blues....... Discovering the silent entity, of the lonely planet inside me. your ending of the poem is really great. ohh thank you dear poet. tony

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Akanhsa Nahar 18 January 2016

Hello Dr. Tony, glad to know that you liked my poem....

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Fabrizio Frosini 26 September 2015

yeah, I know such a feeling.. :) thanks for sharing, Akansha

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Kelly Kurt 26 September 2015

A lovely, well written poem, Akansha

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Akanhsa Nahar 28 September 2015

Thank you dear Kelly Kurt..

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