Saturday, May 26, 2018

A Walk In Your Presence Comments

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In clarity I see your face,
I taste the tone of an unheard voice,
I can walk with you down an empty street,
Walk silently and smile.
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Sarah Persson
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Alam Sayed 26 May 2018

A beautiful poem with great imagery.

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Sarah Persson 27 May 2018

Thank you Alam

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 May 2018

Break down the walls that hide you well, Throw out the shoes that blister, Take off the hat that stunts your growth, And speak real loud, don't whisper........a pome of real determination and challenge asking the readers to break the barriers.. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Sarah Persson 26 May 2018

Thank you Tony for taking the time to read.

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