Monday, July 25, 2016

A Walk In Time Comments

Rating: 4.3

Beyond the gate the garden patch
gives up its sweet perfume.
The woods reveal a ghost of white,
for dogwoods are in bloom.
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Barry Middleton
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Annette Aitken 28 July 2016

This is such a beautiful piece, the imagination runs wild with the scene you discribe, what a lovely memory to share. love it... Annette

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Barry Middleton 29 July 2016

I am glad you liked it. Thank you for commenting. I appreciate it.

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Nosheen Irfan 28 July 2016

Beautiful. A lovely walk in time...very vivid n evocative. The reader feels like taking a walk with you. The nostalgic tone of the poem puts the reader in the same mood. Very powerfully written.10

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Barry Middleton 28 July 2016

The small farm where I grew up has inspired many poems. Thanks for the comment and praise.

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 July 2016

Beautiful memories enclosed in woods evergreen. Yes, it was A walk in time took us to the loving memories back at that time. I loved all the description of plants, shrubs. This picture too matches with the woods. Loved reading it.

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Barry Middleton 27 July 2016

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

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Dimitrios Galanis 26 July 2016

So sensitivelly recalled the memories of a passed lovely bond.In time appropriate may I try to translate it too.

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Barry Middleton 27 July 2016

Thanks as always Dimitrios.

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