Monday, November 21, 2022

A Walk In The Smog Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't know where it goes
The road we are walking on
Tentative footsteps lurk
Around edges of a garden
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 November 2022

Smog is inside me as well... the quest to scan the own soul adds dignity to the corpus of the poem. I appreciate the meticulous review of esteemed poet David. A wonderful poem. To my favourites.

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David Wood 21 November 2022

Love is a road we travel down with tentative steps because we want love to work and blossom. you have written a delightfully exquisite poem that goes to my favourites.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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