A Walk In Longwood Gardens Comments

beautiful walk you are sharing with us. i had to look up cajole because it didn't seem like a good choice, but i found that there were several definitions and i was thinking of the one regarding deception. the poem is very nice and i appreciate it a lot, but i do find that there are several errors in typing....either by you or done mysteriously by poemhunter, as i know from personal experience sometimes happens. here are areas i am referring to: fruit rees .....and...... the.the trees are not to fell ..... and.....forests our our national heritage (are OUR?) as for your glorifying God.........: perhaps God deserves the glory for the things you describe because you believe He created them (i am on the fence about that; i am agnostic/atheist) . but what should one think about God if we also credit Him/Her? with war? yes, i know some people will say PEOPLE have free will and they create war. ok. how about tornadoes/monsoons/hurricanes which cause destruction and death? how about rattlesnakes and cobras which kill and maim humans? how about car accidents which are not blamed on humans but which injure/kill humans and destroy property? how about lightning which kills and burns, etc etc? see what i'm getting at? ? ? but thanks for sharing. you have been lucky to have the opportunity to enjoy nature. and we have been lucky that you have shared nature with us.

Arti...A well penned poem which takes the reader along on a beautiful nature ride. Just felt that the last two paragraphs did not fit into the rythm of the poem...your first three paras..the last line ended with the same rhyming...if you had continued in the last two paras...it would have made a great poem perfect. TO