Wednesday, April 11, 2018

A Walk In A Dying Glory Comments

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As I stroll down the chequered causeway
With the rolling sunwheel on on my left,
I pick some bits of snug small talk
The passers-by trouble to waft.
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Dr Antony Theodore 17 April 2018

The playful iridiscent waterglass, The ripple holding some jaunt boats, The joyful folks bobbing their trunks. Very powerful use of words and theme.. you cogitate on your way. very nice poem dear poet. thank u. tony

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Oleg Vorobyov

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