Thursday, May 8, 2008

A Walk Along Daw End Canal Comments

Rating: 5.0

From Longwood I walk past the barges all moored there
Along the canal as I head on my way,
Thus leaving the noise from the traffic behind me
So glad to be part of this wonderful day.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Sid John Gardner. 23 December 2008

Andrew this is marvellous stuff.Wish that I wrote with such expression and a feeling for nature and its beaut.Perhaps some who inhabit such an idyllic setting could match your skill in description of their world.A very enjoyable write. Best wishes, Sid.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 20 May 2008

Nice poem.I can feel Wordsworth and Frost both are there.........I liked it

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David Desantis 20 May 2008

This is one of the most imagery packed poems i've read on here...beautiful man.

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Lynda Robson 15 May 2008

What a wonderful poem Andrew, it is packed full of wonderful imagery, I am going to keep this as a favourite, Lynda xx

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Ernestine Northover 09 May 2008

What a wonderful read Andrew. I read it on the Forum where Duncan had posted it, in your name of course, and it is beautifully described and the pictures you paint are a delight.100 marks I reckon on this one. So glad I found it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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C.R. Clark 09 May 2008

Andrew, my friend, I would be really shocked to read any poem of yours that was not great, but this.one is awesome. Your descriptions are so colorful and the flow is just perfect making a very easy read. I do agree with Duncan, I think this is one of the best poems I've ever read. Thank you.Best regards Richard

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Duncan Wyllie 09 May 2008

This is something really special, to be read slowly, and thus savoured and enjoyed all the more, Andrew I hope that you feel really pleased with yourself after writing this one, it is in-fact one of the most wonderful poems I have ever read Love duncan X

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Alison Cassidy 09 May 2008

Andrew, you poetry soothes, like the music of Schumann. Your images please, like the paintings of Renoir. Your stanzas sing, like the voice of Bryn Terfel. You are indeed, a clever lad. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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delilah contrapunctal 08 May 2008

Hello Andrew A very lovely poem....thankyou Love, D.

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Bonnie Collins 08 May 2008

How beautifull, and filled with so much imagery and gentle with each and every corner that the reader comes in contact with, very refreshing and so peacefull.... Excellent in my oppion.... Bonnie collins

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