A Walk Alone! Comments

I thought it was simple but Oh lord! Life is a whirlwind failing to cease...! - - - - - > lines straight from the heart

My friend it is an amazing poem.... Each line is filled with the strong emotion of heart... I have no answers nor any questions to ask... My favorite lines.. -Rain...

Very emotional. Nice write. Keep on writing. Your best is yet to come

Honest flow of turbulent emotions, that has no answers or questions, just the realization of the passing of happiness all I can say is from a quote This too will pass! You write from your heart and soul with such honesty, beautiful!

Awesome poem. The restlessness is inevitable. my favourite lines are: from a walk to remember To this walk alone The life no more has any magic to perform. Thumbs up!

Nice poem. You nicely penned your feelings. I like it.

I feel the same as Mary Angela Douglas about finding life to be much happier than you could even imagine. It's the restlessness of your youth. Enjoy riding these rapids before you become the calm river

I feel the same as Mary Angela Douglas about finding life to be much happier than you could even imagine. It's the restlessness of your youth. Enjoy riding these rapids before you become the calm river

hey there i'm here as requested: D so, i truely found it a great piece of yours, so deep and true...and it has emotions. i would suggest to turn the two lines of the second part to this Created, destroyed and was resting in peace... Nourished, flourished and destroyed just to be rested in peace... so all the lines be the same length. also change this My needs so hazy my dreams so blurred to My needs are so hazy and my dreams are so blurred hope i helped kepp it up smiley

Thank you for asking me to comment on your poem although I don't know more than anyone else about poetry. Every poet is an expert on his own poems because his (or her) poems represent the Kingdom God gave to that special, unique child. I believe this. Your pain is very great and comes through the words. This is the root of great poetry, keep writing but also please look for small moments of happiness and write of them too. The small happy moments can shed a greater light than you might imagine right now at the beginning of your life. Best Wishes from Mary Angela Douglas