Saturday, March 1, 2014

A Walk Comments

Rating: 4.8

Sun's chrome rays
Wash my morning face
Parting it's ways
Through tamarind lace
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Ila Sumam
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Jazib Kamalvi 24 October 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Ila. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Valsa George 02 March 2014

Dancing mist sliver Like spider web river On the grass's quiver And still I don't shiver! Can any one paint a cool misty morning with greater beauty? Just lovely, Illa! For this wonderful write, I give you a 10

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