Thursday, August 27, 2009

A Wakeful Night (Haiku) Comments

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Seema Aarella
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Obinna Eruchie 30 August 2009

To keep yourself to sleep, a way by counting sheep. Nice haiku.

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rajagopal haran 27 August 2009

haiku people are very great writers as they express a lot in a nutshell

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Rakesh Bedi 27 August 2009

Lovely seema; .....as sleep fell asleep, i liked the expression......

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Mamta Agarwal 27 August 2009

very graphic, could be called a senryu also. good one Mamta

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Indira Babbellapati 27 August 2009

a good example of transferred epithet...

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Seema Aarella

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