A Wake Comments

A whole new look at a wake.....have never really considered my own and how the last chapter will be read by the living...another good write Christopher

Very nicely done very very good i really like it

I really liked this poem, it had me thinking about my future and my life story! great write! ! ! !

It is deep and good message, to readers...... wonderfully written

nice, simple and beautiful.i am too a new here..hope we could write more...grace

well, here there are few and sweet poems i like the way you write i really like your poetry you have done well! thanks for sharing luwi

I love poems like that that really expresses the truth but also leaves you with new ideas and gives you some really good advice. You've written it in a very snappy witty way with a lovely flow from verse to verse. :)