Up and down as I walk along the road
There're trees so many..many many..but
I don't! !as I feel a vast empty space
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There is always a space untill it is filled by love, a beautiful porm.
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful love song. I simply loved it. Feel like returning again and again to read this poem.100+++
The 'Padams' performed by the south Indian classical dancers always have similar themes. The 'nayika'. awaits her beloved. She talks to her Sakhi or friend and pours forth her unhappiness. She says that nothing in nature can make her happy unless and until her beloved comes to her. For me reading this poem, dear Indira madam, was like actually performing a dance on stage..
A beautiful, emotional poem that touches your very soul. There are trees, flowers, birds, yet the empty feeling within stays. This poem is exactly like the 'Padams we perform in dance. Lovely poem with a full score.
Only when love is around, we will be able to see and enjoy Natures beauty! When the loved one is absent the whole world will seem an empty space! Enjoyed this poem which is highly lyrical!
Beautiful poem Indira. Only a heart filled with love can see the paradise all around. A 10++
A beautiful poem of love, Indira. Lovely and heartwarming. The repetition of the words give more emphasis to the feelings you feel for your beloved. Very passionate.10 and onto my Poem List.
Who is that anonymous lover of yours? A lovely poem dear madam! Liked the way you have composed the piece of work! Stay always happy and blessed dear madam!
love is the be all and end all of life - -Ma'am you have not yet my well read- - -MY two poems MOMS SMILES AND MOTHER'S DAY TODAY LIKE THEM YOU WILL- - MANY HAVE TRANSLATED THESE- - YOU MAY ALSO KINDLY IN YOUR LANGUAGE MORE WILL SHARE IT