Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Wednesday, December 12, 2018

A Waist Is A Terrible Thing To Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just once a week, my group makes stops
at doughnut shops,
where we partake
of things that make
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Kim Barney
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Arcilla de la Playa 11 October 2022

I really like this! Five stars and to my favorites! Short and sweet!

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Kim Barney 14 October 2022

Thank you, Arcilla. Your comment is appreciated.

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Kim Barney 15 June 2021

Note: in 2019, I again took third place in the Minute Poem category of the NFSPS contests with my poem 'Wishful Fishing'. In 2020, the poem that I submitted did not place.

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Rajnish Manga 13 December 2018

One little taste can't hurt my waist.... //.... True, until you need a larger size of apparel to put on. Lovely poem with a lovelier picture on obesity and obese. Thanks.

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Kim Barney 14 December 2018

Thanks, Rajnish. Your comments are always appreciated.

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 December 2018

oh! the scene hurts the fairness of body and mind! /// nice and funny

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Kim Barney 14 December 2018

Thank you, Mahtab. Glad you liked it.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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