A Vulture Flies Comments

African savannah, picturesquely grand, This insatiable bird in all its substance, Seeking carrion waste in great abundance.....beautiful poem with very clear messge. all seraching for hunt and filling their stomach.s womderful presentation....10 read mine...not easy.... rising sun

beautifully constructed, very good poem

'Cordon Bleu’ - excellent metaphor. loved reading your poem.

This poem takes one on a ride of highs & lows. The grace of this great bird in flight to the vulture that it is scavenging on the ground. Sent shivers down my spine Alf. Brilliantly written. I cannot fault this, save to correct that simile that I just loved! Your reference to 'Cordon Bleu'.... A vulture flies on Azure blue Skies, Africa’s ‘Cordon Blue’ of flesh demise; - EXCELLENT.

The poem is not just a landscape of wild Africa, It symbolizes some meaningful aspects of the life and its theory of survival of the fittest. The last line uplifts the whole poem. Good poem, Alf..................10. Regards Naseer

A very vivid poem that well defines this scavenger. thanks for the invite. JL.

Beautiful poem Alf. Great descriptions.

an excellent poem on survival. a ten

yeah this poem reminds one's of the wild wild africa...........a good write......

The poem is a reminder of wild Africa that I love so much.

A beautiful sceneries of wild life and natures.Great piece Alf.

well, a nice explanation and good way of writing dear Alf thanks for sharing well done nice poem

I love the bush that hides so much magic there. Vultures circling means I am in bush again. Thank you Alf great poem. 10+

Absolutely perfect imagery Alf, I have actually seen what you describe so accurately in faultless poetic language....10+++++

Fantastic poem..picture perfect! !

No doubt, you have seen them in action to describe such a vivid description of their existence. Nicely done

vultures fly by flocks..and that is their nature...grace

beautiful write indeed. nice rhyming.. beautiful imagery.

This is a great piece of writing Alf, beautifully woven and produced. A super read with really good imagery putting a living picture into ones mind. Well done indeed. It reminds me of a film I saw many years ago called, 'Where No Vultures Fly' a very memorable viewing. Fascinating creatures, even if they are a bit ugly. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

'A Vulture Flies' deserves world wide acclaim! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I thought I only flew in my dreams, however that is not so - loved itxxxxxx