Saturday, May 16, 2009

A Void Three Comments

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You can’t have three worries in one thought
Can’t kill three bodies with one bullet, you just can’t
Can’t put an anaconda, a lion and an eagle in one cage
Can’t drink vodka, whiskey and wine from one glass
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Christos R. Tsiailis
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Kale Beaudry 25 May 2009

I really liked this one. It was short but no less sweet. The subtle repetition brings the poem around to form the last link the chain. Vivid imagery, solid points, and wonderfully turned the conclusion on its head.

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Linda Ori 25 May 2009

Not unless you suffer from multiple personality disorder! Interesting insight, Christos. Nicely done! Linda :)

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Sandra Martyres 25 May 2009

Nice write...imagination is one thing - reality is another..

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Kizza Michael 25 May 2009

all may seem possible in a myth but in reality, they arent possible, beautiful piece....

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Christos R. Tsiailis

Christos R. Tsiailis

Nicosia, Cyprus
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