Friday, January 8, 2016

A Voice From Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

I heard a voice that came from the heart
That He/It will not be with me in my mourning

मेरे सुने दिल की धड़कन से एक आवाज़ ये आई है
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 28 December 2016

Classic one, in two lines you said everything, precise and profound.

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Kelly Kurt 09 January 2016

Two lines with a novel of meaning.10+

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Souren Mondal 08 January 2016

Short, simple, beautiful, and wonderfully crafted.. Thanks for sharing Asim..10.

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Aarzoo Mehek 08 January 2016

Marne ke baad bhi uska wajood tumhare rooh ka hissa hai, wo aai n aaai kya farq paRta hai.. Lajawab.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 January 2016

Life and death are two realities with beats of heart as we know. Very amazing poem shared here again.10

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M. Asim Nehal

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