Tuesday, January 26, 2021

A Voice - Ballade Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I went past the mountain, hill,
A voice echoed and said something;
Won't you see my sweetest rill?
I stopped, searched, was there anything
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rebecca Navarre 04 February 2021

Written quite eloquently! ...

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Rebecca Navarre 04 February 2021

Wow powerfully moving! .. Very beautifully expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ................

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Shreya Hacks 28 January 2021

Yet another fantastic poem.

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Poetic Sky 26 January 2021

A wait to catch. Nicely explained.

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Rini Shibu 26 January 2021

Nice imagery, beautiful

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Varsha M 26 January 2021

And the voice I heard was a bird's match. Beautiful words.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 26 January 2021

Conscience and introspection they go hand in hand.

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Kostas Lagos 26 January 2021

Another excellent poem my friend

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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