Friday, October 7, 2016

A Voice Comments

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When she sows virtue in my heart,
My Self wakes within.Then it happens;
By veiling herself from my sight,
wanders in the darkness of my heart.
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Zakir Hussain Haidary
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Jazib Kamalvi 04 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Zakir. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Indira Renganathan 27 March 2017

Again a true love poem....true hearty words....too good a poem....thanks for sharing

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Kathy Van Kurin 07 October 2016

Just Beautiful I appreciate your rendering of love. She sows virture in my heart. That in itself speaks volumes. Love should be just like that for from this can come many years of freiindship and growth together. thankyou for writing this it was a positive portrayal of love.

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Chinedu Dike 07 October 2016

Beautiful depiction of love as a mighty spiritual experience and voyage of pure bliss, well articulated and nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Lovely poem elegantly brought forth in good diction with insight. Thanks for sharing Zakir. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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