A Vixen’s Aspiration Comments

Beautiful poem. Cleverly crafted. I wonder I deserve this dedication! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! However, thanks a lot. CP

There is something missing in the last two stanzas that makes the poem a little vague and incomplete....good attempt

Some nice potic lines here. The penultimate line needs work. Jim

A polite poignant write........loved the way lines moves on...............10++ sebastine

it seems like a sad love story.

There is nothing worse than being toyed with then spurned-for some people LOVE is just a game-beware of the vixens-SHE FOXES-it's what's inside a person that counts-outer beauty fades....another ten for perception...

Powerful assets and dangerous, beauty and brains - [some comb]

A little gloomy, but just as good as the last one -8!

Sad poem indeed, but that does not eliminate its beauty.

Wonderful poem of one tragic figure.

wonderful poem, i like it, thanks for sharing it with us

Beautiful as ever Ahmed Thanks for sharing

good creative verses...

A great aspiration! Beautifully portrayed! Thanks for sharing!

When everything goes beyond limit only miracle can transform the situation into a heaven and that is possible only by the one who has the grace of God! I think God will not keep him so forever but only purify him to have a high place in heaven though he undergoes all sorts of hellish things as in a cave of tragedy on the Earth!

Interesting poem. Intriguing (for me) the last strophe. Very much nicely and brightly you are expressing your thoughts. I like it. I am greeting :) Maria Barbara Korynt

My rating to your poem is 10. lovely poem and good and nice. thanks to share with me

...written in a unique way! ..

I was able to grasp some of the symbolic aspects of this, I think. But most of it was clearly too vague to understand. Also, some of the word usages, I believe, are not correct. But since I can't be sure what is meant, I can't be sure that it needs to be corrected. This is a creative work though. GW62

A tad mysterious, but an interesting write Ahmad....I like it