Saturday, January 3, 2009

A Vital Piece Comments

Rating: 5.0

the silence that is falling from your mouth is deafening
it used to be the sound of comfort;
the sound of undisputed perfection.
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Beverley Katherine
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Laurie Hill 05 March 2009

This is excellent. I love the last stanza...a definate 10+

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C T Heart 07 January 2009

Beautiful poem you have penned here Beverly, so heartfelt that your words flow naturally with your golden pen...10++++

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