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when DDT is present in the sperm of every man and in the ovum of every woman in this nation, what is the point in washing a fruit?

Yes, who can wait and waste time! One who waits, gets an empty bowl. A very very original write. Your speciality, Mamta. Regards Naseer

Good real time write...it's always tastier to read about what one feels what one observes in life...nice words nicely formatted lines, Mamta...thanks...10

Its a sense of unlimited freedom Perfection, kept aside For the sake of joy for the moment Uncontrolled, hinders the level of consciousness Senses say, 'why to waste time, seize the pleasure' Aftermath, a glare at the remaining stones and dust. You have hidden an ethical number Behind these worldly cherries. The one who can see the real color Can feel the pinch of the pesticide too. Limit what, its only in a wise man's hat. Once again, a great write dear poet. Thank you so much.

hi mamtaji a just so poem....just as i like them...as fresh and dlecteble as the cherries refer you to lisa's post today...might give you pause a beauty write cheers

A real visual treat this poem...with very creative imagery....purple red cherries are difficult to resist - never mind the aftermath or the sins of gluttony..10+++++ Mamta

'You will pay For your gluttony. Appropriately, adjusted my expression Looking shamefaced and sheepish. But tell me, who can resist Such a delectable treat? Waste time washing Off grime and pesticides…' Excellent poem with marvelous ending.10+++

You made me speechless to this lovely meaningful poem...10+++

excellent poem..loved and enjoyed it..It brushed against my lips, Sensuously tickling my Taste buds; ripe for a bite. Before I knew, the bowl Was almost, empty. At the bottom Sat a small heap Of stones and stalks; If they could speak… I could read in The silence;

really good enuf to read this piece.. lovely 1.

oh! .....for glutton such treat is great great great....... well penned.........

oh! .....for glutton such treat is great great great....... well penned.........