Sunday, November 20, 2005

A Visit To Victoria's Secret Comments

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I made a left
and pulled into the huge
Staten Island Mall parking lot
my sister and Nancy hopped out
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Charles Chaim Wax
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Amy Carr 14 December 2005

How rare to find the extraordinary in the ordinary - the things we say to the people we know without even taking notice of how far our words have taken us.

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Cj Heck 20 November 2005

Excellent, Charles - one of my favorites from you! Again, excellent poem. Warmest regards and a hug, CJ

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Naveen Choudhary 20 November 2005

Hi charles that a new beggining a new style of poetry. a nice ploy.keep it up. a nice blend of a story and poem in end Just try a sexy plunge thru my new poem: A Seductive Plunge In Her Slight Elegance........

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