Tuesday, May 3, 2005

A Visit To The Pension Office Comments

Rating: 3.7

'He's just a kid', I thought.
Still wet behind the ears.
The patience that he brought,
a man of so few years,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 10 September 2005

Nice.....I could picture you actually doing this......lol!

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Savannah Churchill 13 May 2005

Shame euthenasia is compulsory at retirement

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 03 May 2005

A very realistic poem.Nice subject.The goons added nice action to the story.Well written.Thank you.

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P.O.P. Erwin Baxter 03 May 2005

YOU BRING A DIGNIFIED PRESENCE TO THE SITE HERBERT, STICK AROUND ALL THE BEST ERWIN

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Michael Shepherd 03 May 2005

A revealing contemporary situation. The bully and the victim are so close in many of us, that the one feeds off the other. Thanks for this.

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