Sunday, November 16, 2008

A Visit To The Hospital Ward Comments

Rating: 4.8

a visit to the hospital ward,
at twilight time before the Sabbath
depressing and necessary,
void and empty,
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shimon weinroth
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Brian Jani 07 July 2014

Simon you painted a vividly tangible scene of the hospital.well done

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There are moments that mandate that we measure our mortality. This poem deals with serious issues with a kind of ease that makes it refreshing.

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Viola Grey 16 November 2008

I love the ending of this one....why is it that we fight so hard towards the end, rather than all through life....you always get my brain ticking Shimon, always

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