Thursday, January 23, 2014

A Visit To Amaravati Comments

Rating: 5.0

Amaravatii is serene and smelly within
She is yet like a bride with a veiled face
Shy and virtuous or timid and afraid
Away from the noisy and overstaying guests outside her chamber.
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Dinesan Madathil 24 January 2014

Madam Valsa, Thank you a lot for your comments. In fact one need not like this poem and it is lying here mostly unread. I have made the correction of both the words wrongly spelt by me. Thank you

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Valsa George 24 January 2014

A wonderful travelogue and the hisorical data accompanying it on Amaravati! The poem exudes a serenity as the serene locale described! Many beautiful lines in the poem like; To the gusts of wind, I plead Carry this pace and strides ahead Into times we may cherish As the Light of Asia has to beam out. I give you a10 for giving the feel of having seen this place, staying in one's private closet! !

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