A Visit From The Past Comments

lol totally awesome reminds me of when i tried to choke someone with my tounge.

lol totally awesome reminds me of when i tried to choke someone with my tounge.

A brilliant short piece where every word works for you. I love the unique approach you bring to poetry. Steve

Just wanted to come back and reaffirm my love for this piece aroha, r

It looks as if you need some magic love potion to improve your appetite...an imaginative write...original and unique...10

Hey Vi! Where ya bin? ? ? Nice to have you back And as steamy as ever!

How gorgeous is this! Love it! You are so honest with your work, and there are no hidden agendas in this one that I can see. A different kind of love, much easier and more lovely for you. Karin Anderson

What a lovely way of expression, in such a few short verses ive never wanted me lip nibbled so much, thats why we love your work, you can almost taste the words.10 Stacks of dirty dishes Jon

this made me think and then write good job.... Love it. our need for something always seems to grow. Becca

Very short and precise conveying the full meaning in so little words is no easy feat.very nice! ! !

Once we taste soul Viola we can never forget it - - this is a brilliant little verse - - it says such a lot........ thanks and a big 10 for it..... with a hug....Fay...xx

left gasping; guessing what wind blew my senses away? ? ? awesome

Deep expressionate words you have used Viola...liking this...10+++...thanks...Fi

Is it age, complacency or contentment? : 0) ........10

good write a lot said in few words 10+

Not so greedy now then, this is actually a very deep piece, well worked.10++ regards Tom