Friday, August 4, 2006

A Visionary Vision Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't try to fix me, I'm not broken
I slip at times into an unimaginable sleep
Listen closely for I have spoken
My words come from within; deep
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Kristin Nicole RothDavis
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Ernestine Northover 05 August 2006

Oh, Kristin, this one went straight to my heart, what a 'Wow' write. So emotional and so poignant, this is one great work. Lovely, lovely, lovely.! ! ! ! ! I'm lost for words to describe how much I loved reading it. Bless you for creating it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 05 August 2006

TAI HAS IT SPOT-ON...KEEP THAT PEN A POPPIN' & PUMPIN' & YEARS FROM NOW, YOU WILL LOOK BACK ON THIS AS ONE HELLIFIED YEAR THAT TURNED OUT ALRIGHT, FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE...GREAT PENNING POETESS K.! BEAM ME UP WHENCE YOU'VE GOT O' CHANCE MISS KRIS..FRANK(The Frankster) FJR

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Nalini Hebbar 04 August 2006

beautiful kristin...the poem and your heart...love...nalini

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***** ********* 04 August 2006

There is time enough for everything Kristin, just keep writing it out girlie friend of mine, it will be just fine, you are on the mend and your visionary vision is superb evidenc of it to me. Smilling at you, Tai

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Scarlett Treat 04 August 2006

Kristin, this is such a sensitive look at the journey to the other side. But all of us here at PH know how strong you have had to be, and we love you. Scarlett

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Michael Manners 04 August 2006

A beautiful sad Poem, Kristin! Well written, I think it's great! the flow & rhyme, this poem has it all! It's right up there with 'dreamland' 4 me! excellent Poem! Kirsten! Love, your Friend St.Sir Michael Manners

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

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