A Vision Of The Past Poem by Smoky Hoss

A Vision Of The Past

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Walking into the optometrist office recently
I held open the door for a departing old man,
slowly leaving the building
and wearing gaudy Rhinestone sunglasses.
As he passed, long white hair perfectly in place,
he muttered, "Thank you…
Thank you very much."
As I walked up to the receptionist
I slowly realized that I recognized the old man,
so I asked,
"Hey. Was that really…"
She held up her hand,
stopping my question, and said,
"Yes… and he's going blind as a bat.
The only thing he ever sees anymore is
the big E
on the top of the eye chart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 11 May 2024

Great poem, Smoky. Thank you. Thank you very much.

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Smoky Hoss 01 June 2024

You're welcome… very welcome!

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Glen Kappy 11 May 2024

Dang! Another partial message just got sent, and I wasn't anywhere near the paper plane icon. Anyway, there was surprise for me in this poem when I realized it was Elvis and not Liberace you were referring to. -Glen

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