A Vision Comments
Sometimes the flickering light gets awesome bright
Sometimes it dims and you tend to drift far way
When things are not working right, don't sail
But stay and get your thoughts focused
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The theme of the poem is great and acceptable to all. Your poet's note clearly identify the meaning of life and decision making. Dear Doris, you have inscribed this poem astutely and nicely with touching diction that I appreciate. The structure of the poem looks attractive in 'V' shape. Thank u a lot.10
This is the reason for poems: illumination of our path by others who sees our light when it gets dark. Thank you, Kumarmani for lending me your light.: -)
Such an inspiring poem, Doris... Amazing arrangement...10++++
Hi Bernard, It's a K poem. A glitch from the inner universe. Inspired by my imperfection. At one point in our life, we all must make this decision whether to risk sailing or hide in a cove and be nothing.: -)
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It's a majestic K shape but can be also taken as a V for Victory, the human spirit prevailing through rigors of circumstances. Material substance cannot prevail over the indomitable spirit.: -)