Like a sudden appearance of death,
The image intrudes on my vision,
Trampling underfoot every obstructing thought
Like a hurt man bent on revenge,
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A very nice piece of work.Keep it up that we may also learn from you.Thank you very much. Edward Kofi Louis.
========= a very nice poem===== killing others for same crimes you commit often =================conscience is the judgge ================kip it up=======================
sometimes people's poems seem like shadows.well, this is one shadow that touches and grasp.nice piece.