Wednesday, February 11, 2009

A Virtue Or A Sin Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Sleepless nights and the joyless days
Where I have been stuck in an unsolved maze?

Can’t find the right way out
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Ali Ahmed
Confused
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Greenwolfe 1962 13 February 2009

The first few lines of rhyme were only fair, but the last few lines were fantastic. I would like to see some of the early lines redone. However, this is still a fine poem and it has a very good ending. Which, is very important. GW62

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