Wednesday, February 2, 2011

A Virtual Visit To Egypt Comments

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The land of Moses and Aron,
Country of Joseph, the prettiest one,
Kingdom of Namrod and Phiraon,
Where Abraham with truth won.
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Mohammad Muzzammil
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Abdallah Gamal 09 July 2011

I don't know what I say.. Long life Egypt.. ((I'm a Egyptian u know! ! :)))

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Ata Ata 08 February 2011

I know history of Egipt and your poem in beautiful way exposes it, about politic no comment because it is not my country and I haven't right to discuss that.Tfs your thoughts

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Amy Marie 03 February 2011

You did a good job using structure in this poem. It has some rhymes, which is interesting. Just so you know, it took a while to leave this comment because I kept having to log in. I've learned about Egypt in school before.

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Jenny Gordon 02 February 2011

Fascinating! Thank you for this virtual, verbal tour through Egypt historically with a vision of her marvels and their vanity. Your conclusion is doubtless well-intentioned....but a dangerous one to verbalize so openly, it seems to me. We all wish her prosperity and only in truth, but I think the present situation is not the solution. Only in God and His Word will she find freedom and salvation, to which you seem to allude, and there we agree and disagree. Excellent tribute to Egypt and the current drama!

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