Tuesday, May 22, 2018

A Virtual Eden Comments

Rating: 5.0

The warm sun from afar gently wakes me
I yawn and then briskly greet my people
My neighbor smiles back after saying hi
All the people mix and race to the fields
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Tariq Alkaritty
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Jazib Kamalvi 23 May 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Tariq. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Tariq Alkaritty

Tariq Alkaritty

Dar es Salaam, Tanzania
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