Saturday, October 31, 2009
A Villain In All Of Us Comments
Rating: ★4.5
The hero stands across from me, I dare not speak his name.
Chivalrous and Valiant, the source of all my shame.
I wonder how it came to this. What was my mistake?
That he should be the hero is a sick and twisted fate.
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Penney Cooper
04 November 2009
I love this, you've got real talent. May I make one small suggestion? ! Break it into two verses. Excellent :)
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7/18/2025 8:41:08 PM # 1.0.0
Very catchy, and I love the way you capture it with the wording...