A Village Temple Comments

a wonderful scenario well captured. the last para indeed is fitting. voted10 surya

it's a painting in words!

nice, i could relate the poem to one of my fav temple

I read this twice, and felt I have a beautiful journey to the temple. Thank you so much for taking me into this wonderful journey.

Beautiful picture and you have brought the real sense and the feelings around....

lovely sir...you have brought the sound sight smell...everything of the shrine into this lovely poem..it was like being there

The poet has brought before my eyes the scene of a temple very nicely and simply.

so fabulous point outs and descriptions...love its poetic play! ! !

Words capture a feeling well.

A fitting write to the serenity of worship regards Alf

a perfect discribing of church`s atmosphere... amazing poem

'Here are the very roots / Life opens her wings. / These are spaceless moments / Man drifts to his own womb.' It is true, a temple is a place, where one can meditate undisturbed to find inner peace. An insightful piece.