Wednesday, September 28, 2016

A View Upon The World (Hybridanelle) Comments

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At times I look and do not see
and then it is as if I am blind.
What is right there in front of me
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Gert Strydom
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 September 2016

Wow a hybridanelle! Never knew of this form so it was fun reading this not so common rhyme scheme. U did it superbly well with a meaningful inspiring refrain as to our tendency to take what's in front of us for granted. Kudos poet. Nice to red from u again. Do pls review my latest poem too.

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Johannesburg, South Africa
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