A View From My Mind Comments

I like the pirouette, which the words make here: 'Gregorian hymn from San Marco Dropped....(twist on the tiptoes) Into the stream water in flame Memory'.....(twist on the tiptoes again): well penned, with lightness

Attractive and carrying away … somehow 'eloquent' fragments from a feature film …Thanks...

A nice poetic venture……with apt figures of speech, metaphors, allusions, her eye lifted The sound to the bells’ ear…very thoughtful metaphor making the scene sensuous, pictographic modern imagery…, no line is said directly but beautifully decorated in poetic diction…reminds me of the classical poetry…very well written

'Sun days died in peace'- great expression!

'Purple rains unease The air Sundays Died In peace. ' YOU well draw words... (Venice is my weakness,) This is loveli and nice... Tsira