Tuesday, November 3, 2009

A Victim Of The Unseen Corner Of Life Comments

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everyday i used to see her,
sitting on the sand,
playing with the dust of dreams..
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true little angel
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Iron Panda 23™ 02 March 2010

i really like this :)

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Jaideep Garg 24 November 2009

so beautifully written mam... well mam... the line which touched me a lot'' her sad look falls down on the ground..''well mam can i have u r email id...

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Bryan Alexander 08 November 2009

I love the line 'playing with the dust of dreams'..... good work

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you got big heart. :) keep it

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Aziz Alkaabi 04 November 2009

This is such a passionate call, woven with a delicate conforming language to portray some dark side of some humans and to speak for those unable to speak. Only little angels can dare and dwell in these places. Lovely work.

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