So, your mind drifts
to the nearest bar while I try and communicate with you?
Your stomach turns, as I attempt to speak of the day to day, inane requirements of running a household?
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This is absolutely brilliant. Wonderfully written and a joy to read. In response to Diana's comment, some of us DO know. We're not all thoughtless planks! Hope this poem found its mark.
An earnest poetic outcry of a woman for care when in tears. A very well structured poem very well corroborated with the thematic mood. CP