A Very Shapely Girl Comments
A very shapely girl
a diamond bracelet she wore
around one of her ankles
a black pearl ear ring she wore
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A nice poem. Found nothing wrong in it. Some comments are truly disgusting and outrageous!
COMMENT CONTD PH RESTRICTIONS OF WORDS 300...There's is a vast choice for humans appreciate else remain silent You may move on to better pastures...where you graze alone but silently Poetry is not today every man's cup of tea, many love coffee..
O commentators....All poets write out of personal experience one's own minds exultation... never decry an artist what so ever... it's not necessary to comment..no one asked you to and if your own mind is shallow and vision blurred twill be better you moved on to another world... why meddle with a poetic herd and try just to offend the poet he or she has not composed it for you there are 7.5 billion can any poet including you make all stand up for you.
posing like a model taking a photo shoot! *** Who knows what a degrading, vulgar life you lead; how horrible the surroundings must have been when you posed to have this picture taken; what a cheap soul you must have.. -
She came in and sat down! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
How observant you are! Till the finest details, makes the poem containing more sensuality than poetry, but that is the signature of the poet Dorsey, I reckon. Congrats on being chosen as Member Poem Of The Day! A 10 Vote.
Poems must go beyond the physical chamth and sensual description. There was an age in Oriental poetry when description of woman's body was the most favoured theme. I think it is high time to get over and think about their safety and beauty of mind.
Amazing, that word is reserved for excellence. It doesn't fit this effort.
A very lively portrait of a glamorous girl created with lovely words. Great work. A very shapely girl posing like a model taking a photo shoot!
she came in and sat down in a chair facing the door posing like a model taking a photo shoot! .......... a fine poem fine images. thank u dear poetess.. congrats! ! !
Indians do run this site. It smells like curry. Can anyone tell what I'd win if I scratched off that dot in the middle of their forehead?
Dorsey, such a lovely poem penned in shape...congrats for being chosen... huge 10++++
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7/26/2025 4:06:56 PM # 1.0.0
Lovely descriptive piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth in persuasive expressions with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Dorsey.