Monday, April 16, 2012
A Very Refreshing Breeze Comments
Rating: ★5.0
As I walked by the lake in the wee hours before the break of day
I thought about nothing at all but just absorbed the freshness that
came my way
The freshness wash's away all that dulls the gleam of life
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Sharad Juneja
21 April 2012
Very refrshing indeed...a small advice i want to give ...shorten n make ur sentences crisp...even i used to do the same... now i have improved a bit
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7/21/2025 7:15:11 AM # 1.0.0
Freshness! With the muse of life. Nice work.